the sketch i wrote :)

soo now i'll write a little sketch plz read it and tel me your reaction it means a lot <3

she was sitting at the bar  just 14 holding a cigarette and thinking: "should i do it? just a little touch it won't hurt right?" and she gave it a touch couldn't resist the tempt anymore. she smiled through her red plump lips and her white teeth started to shine. when she opened her eyes she saw a 30 year old man standing near her he was looking at her with he's blue eyes and was touching his golden hair. he sat near her and smiled
_hey there how old are you? - asked he while smiling
_17! - she lied.- "17 16 15 what is the difference?"- she thought
_Small girl!!! may i have your name?_asked he
_Liz_this time she didn't lie
_so were do you live?
_no more questions please_she mumbled
_why? _ asked he again with he's amazing smile
_i know what you want_she smiled_and it's not my phone number not my name age or anything like that!
_well you are right_again with the smile_so how much are you worth?
_a lot_she said
_how much lot?
_100! for an hour_said and gave cigarette another smoke
_i can pay that!
she didn't give a reply just a slow smiley full of pain hurt devastation . just took the 1000$ he gave her grabbed   his arm and went to his room.
 it was about 8 in the morning when Liz was walking down the street she slowly walked in to the hospital went to room 9 there was about 30 year old woman laying there she couldn't open her eyes . Liz  turned around doctor was standing near her.
_surgery will cost 1000 $ u sure u can pay that? _asked the doctor.
_ yes a have the money i will do anything to save my mother_and she passed the money that the stranger gave her.